Making Comments
You can comment on the pages in the book! That could be a laugh.
I have to approve comments. So if you say things like ‘This is s**t’, then your comment is unlikely to be approved. I do want to allow constructive criticism – that will be interesting. However, I’m not going to rewrite the story, so if you give me a ream of constructive criticism, I may just say ‘whatever’.
I’m sure you will tell me if you think you find inconsistencies or plot holes. But the fact is there aren’t any – this story is 100% consistent and watertight. Actually, now I think about it, there are one or two things I’m not totally happy with…
If you read the pdf, the page numbers should line up exactly with the online version. So you should be able to come back and comment online easily enough.
